Talk:Research in programming Wikidata/Banks

Translation

@Andrew Krizhanovsky, I translated the article. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 23:21, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

@Oksanche: now the tests contains the line in Russian: "1 место, 2 место, 3 место, 4 место". -- Andrew Krizhanovsky (discuss • contribs) 09:31, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

@Andrew Krizhanovsky, I corrected remarks. Do you have any more comments? Oksana Panfilova (discuss • contribs) 21:12, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

Dear @Oksanche: there are several remarks:

1. Wikidate? CORRECTION: Wikidata. I corrected the remark.Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 08:43, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
2. "In addition, the conclusions regarding completeness Wikidata on this topic." The conclusion... Please, add a verb. CORRECTION: the conclusions were drawn regarding...". Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 08:49, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
3. noneempty? CORRECTION: "list of banks which have not a empty label field. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 08:53, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
4. The script in section 2 with "73 results (as of 20.03.2017)" returns list of countries in Russian language :( CORRECTION: I corrected a reference (SPARQL query). Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 08:58, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
5. This information "According to the Wikidata countries with the highest number of banks are: Russia (91)" is outdated, because there are 122 banks in Russia at Wikidata now. There are two variants: (1) add the text that someday (when?) this script returned 91 objects, (2) write here 122 instead of 91, and write in the section "Filling objects" that someday (indicate the date) before your work Wikidata contained only 91 banks. I like second variant. CORRECTION: "According to the Wikidata countries with the highest number of banks are: Russia (122), Sweden (53), USA (45), Germany (34) Spain (30)." "Before filling Wikidata contained only 91 Russian banks, 53 banks of Sweden, 41 banks of USA, 32 German banks, 29 Spanish banks and others." Ok? Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 09:19, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
6. "When we build a list of all banks received 783 [1]." - there is an error in this sentence. Try to reformulate it, please. CORRECTION: The resulting list of all banks received 783.Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 09:22, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
7. "The query of a number of banks in each country all the world we can see a significant decrease of the number of banks." What do you mean here? Try reformulate this long and complex sentence with several more simple sentences. CORRECTION: Request of the number of banks in each country in the world compared to the previous one returns significantly fewer banks: there are only 484 (sum of column "number" ) as at 11.03.17 Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 18:55, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
8. "Thus, most of the instances of "bank" have not the property "country (P17)"..." There is a diffrence between "haven't or don't have". See explanations in Russian: https://fluentli.com/questions/i-don-t-have-or-i-haven-t CORRECTION: Thanks. I corrected. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 18:45, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
9. "...many banks of Wikidata have not information..." - the same error. CORRECTION: Thanks. I corrected. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 18:45, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
10. "the task was considered no longer existing countries" -> "it was taken into account no longer existing countries in this task"
11. "US (43)" -> "USA (43)" CORRECTION:I corrected.Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 09:41, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
12. "precize". Do you speak in Esperanto? See wikt:precize. CORRECTION: "It is a very difficult task — to find information about an accurate number of banks in the world.". I corrected. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 09:45, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
13. "Wikidata (as at 09.04.17) contain substantially less of the banks and the proportion of countries remains the same: Russia is not presented to the Bank 122, US — 43, Germany 33, France — 28, Austria — 6." What means the phrase "Russia is not presented to the Bank"?
14. In this line "According to the category of "List of banks (alphabetically)"" you are using quotes, but in previous line you don't using quotes. Please, be consistent. CORRECTION: I understood and corrected. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 18:20, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
15. I see in the text "{{sfn|Information portal to "Banki"}" CORRECTION: I did it.Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 19:11, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
16. "a sit stated at the webcite of". I think that this phrase contains several errors and I don't understand it :( CORRECTION: There are 556 banks in Russia (as of 10.03.2017), acсording to search request on the webcite of Central Bank of The Russian Federation (result do not include the Central Bank)." I accidentally inserted a value from the buffer when I was looking for a translation of words. Excuse me.Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 18:41, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
17. "Information Russian Wikipedia" - Did you missed some preposition here? CORRECTION: "Information of the Russian Wikipedia...". I corrected. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 09:38, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
18. "Thus, Wikidata to contains" - "to"? CORRECTION: "Wikidata contains". OK. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 09:36, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
19. "noneexisting" again CORRECTION: "returned not existing...". Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 09:29, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
20. "commercial Bank" Why the word "Bank" started from the capital letter here? CORRECTION: I replaced "Bank" for "bank". Oksanche (discuss • contribs)
21. "as it stated in the Wikipedia article "Bank24.ru"." - link don't work. CORRECTION:I correcred.Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 18:18, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
22. "Sub-task" should be without the dash.CORRECTION: OK. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 09:23, 18 May 2017 (UTC)

"Russian Wikipedia has not a singe list of a banks in the world but English Wikipedia has a w:List of Central banks list of Central banks of the world..."

1. This link don't work.
2. Please, hide the symbol "w:".CORRECTION: I corrected. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 09:27, 18 May 2017 (UTC)

Great work, Oksana. Thank you! -- Andrew Krizhanovsky (discuss • contribs) 04:23, 18 May 2017 (UTC)

• And you! :) Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 19:11, 18 May 2017 (UTC)

@Andrew Krizhanovsky, I corrected the article. Oksanche (discuss • contribs) 19:11, 18 May 2017 (UTC)

@Oksanche: I have no comments. Thank you! -- Andrew Krizhanovsky (discuss • contribs) 20:29, 18 May 2017 (UTC)

English editing

I've made a few small edits. Check them out to see if I have the meaning intended. --Marshallsumter (discuss • contribs) 02:25, 21 May 2017 (UTC)

Thank you very much! -- Andrew Krizhanovsky (discuss • contribs) 03:25, 21 May 2017 (UTC)