Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2011/Sensation seeking
Sensation seeking chapter feedback edit
Hi,
I really loved your chapter and in particular the extra work put in to the media and quizzes through out! I did come across a few errors or things that need to be looked over.
- The (APA) referencing needs another look, make sure you are using the right style and approach.
- The subtitle of "however" doesn't quite fit - maybe try a different word?
- Some of the focus questions were about the reader of the text rather than the theory or concept.
- While I love the self administered quizzes, it might be a good idea to link them back to testing ones knowledge learnt, this is outlined in the rubric "focus on concepts rather than trivia".
I hope this is helpful,
GeorgiaH97 (discuss • contribs) 09:34, 8 October 2022 (UTC). GeorgiaH97 (discuss • contribs) 09:12, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
Hey! I enjoyed reading your chapter, a suggestion would be to add more case studies throughout, explaining more throughly to the reader what the theories are. Then they can apply the new learnt knowledge in the focus questions.
hope this helps! --U3230861 (discuss • contribs) 10:48, 14 October 2022 (UTC)