Talk:Comparative law and justice/Belarus

You've got a lot of great info on your page, but need to work more on the presentation. You need to proofread and edit what you write--I suggest reading out loud to yourself. You don't need to list the source for the image (people can click on it to see where it came from). You probably want to use subheadings, and you are missing citations in some places. Your page is in fact not signed! And some of your sections really do need a bit more fleshing out to ensure that you've really covered everything the assignment is asking for in those sections. Of course, please do remember to read over the general comments that I will be sending to everyone via email. Mlarthur 20:50, 20 October 2010 (UTC)