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A well designed and organised presentation. The presentation provides good overall coverage of what motivates sexual jealousy as well as a solid critique of the two related evolutionary and social theories/perspectives. However, it could be improved by simplifying the first half of the presentation and having a stronger focus on the research and theory behind the topic as this section appears rushed. As there is quite a lot of content covered, perhaps an overview slide or initial explanation of the presentation's structure would be helpful to the viewer. An important conclusion slide with a take-home messages about sex and love was included. In-text referencing to match the end of text reference list would improve the presentation as it is difficult for the viewer to establish whether the information is fact or personal opinion.
Communication is good and the visual presentation is basic yet effective. The presentation is generally well-paced however monotone at times – this could be improved by changing the tone of voice and expressions used when reading the slides aloud. The use of illustrative examples in the beginning of the presentation were extremely effective – continuing to use these throughout subsequent slide could have made the presentation more engaging.
The presentation had clear picture and audio quality and demonstrated effective use of a basic production tool to communicate ideas. The presentation was well read/rehearsed. No copyright license is provided for the presentation. No image attributions are provided. A link is provided to the book chapter on the first slide however the link is not clickable. A link is provided from the book chapter to the presentation. A reference list was provided.
Latest comment: 9 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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